David's mini recount

On Saturday when I woke up I went strait to my parents room,there was no one there,I turned to my mum’s dresser I started walking backwards not knowing the window was open.
I tripped over a box of clothes and flew threw the window,I felt clumsy, I flipped and grabbed on to the ledge, I was terrified, Am I “gonna die?” I thought.
I started to pull myself up and after ten minutes I finally made it “Phew I made it” I said. Suddenly my brother walked in “What happened?” He said “Nothing much” I replied.


pranav said...

nice story i like it david

The G's said...

Nice story it is really funny.
Are you OK?


David said...

thanks for the comments

Kanishk said...

that was so cool David really cool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Michael said...

Coo l story David! I like how fnny it is I bet your not that hurt, your tough aint ya?

next time maybe try to spell the word straight properly instead of strait.

Aashay said...

Nice story David it's soooo interesting. By the way a you alright from the fall.

UNKOWN said...

wow david that was funny hope your alright from the fall

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