Joey's mini recount

Splash, splash. I was paddling aimlessly on my floaty in the wave pool at West Wave when a sudden screeching siren pierced my eardrums. “The waves!” I thought and sure enough ,tremendous walls of water smacked into me head-first, pushing me away, leaving me wide-eyed, but it didn’t last long.
The wave chucked me straight in the direction of a wall. I desperately kicked away from the wall and headed for swimming lessons. Relieved that I was in one piece.

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

Were you worried? You describe the story like I was actually there

- Kyla

Fran said...

WOW! was it fun sounds like it.

louise said...

Wow! just wow! I LOVE you're story!!!!!!!!!!
write more please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

twentyonesps said...

What up dog! Sounds like you put lots of power into it
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